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Member Blarg. Yoshi. Of. Composing. Affected by 'RainBlarg' Syndrome Level: 110 Posts: 101/3627 EXP: 14057347 Next: 351539 Since: 12-24-12 Last post: 2266 days ago Last view: 2207 days ago |
this is a really good song. Don't be pressured by just a few who critique your music. I have the most controversial song right now - Dry Boneyard's music. I love it personally, but some feel it's too dark, melody is a bit too much in the background, and it's too ambient (at least the first part). ____________________
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Member Mawile or riot Level: 73 
Posts: 180/1420 EXP: 3457566 Next: 28302 Since: 11-20-12 Last post: 1662 days ago Last view: 1662 days ago |
 we're just giving honest feedback... obviously it's up to him to change it or not |
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Member mah kitty Level: 74 
Posts: 179/1426 EXP: 3535717 Next: 117827 Since: 07-07-12 Last post: 2321 days ago Last view: 886 days ago |
Yeah, definitely put the long notes back in, though slightly quieter than they were in the older version. ____________________ ![[image]](http://puu.sh/jR7Py/69ae5966ec.png)
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|AgentSplaturn| if someone uses an external hard disk to store porn on |AgentSplaturn| is it their sex drive? ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) |skyluigi| agent that's one of the best quotes I've ever seen on this IRC |
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Member Normal user Level: 29 Posts: 27/168 EXP: 139999 Next: 7886 Since: 01-01-13 From: The United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Island Last post: 3846 days ago Last view: 3697 days ago |
I appreciate the feedback so much  It's really helping with the progression of this theme. It's all constructive and it's all useful  New(er) version (possibly final?) should be up tomorrow. |
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Member Some fraud Number 6738 Embodiment of Space Level: 85 
Posts: 100/2007 EXP: 5807145 Next: 91395 Since: 11-24-12 From: Rogaland, Norway Last post: 2902 days ago Last view: 2875 days ago |
Great! Can't Wait to hear it. I like the old one too 
Yay I'm a.......Koopa. Why is Koopa a higher rank then Shy Guy anyway? Shy Guys are better ____________________ Former SMG2.5 Advertiser and one-time Level Designer/Artist - So Apparently Norway is rich while Denmark and Sweden are happy. What they don't know is that our wealth gives us happiness as well  : https://pbs.twimg.com/media/BfA4EbJCEAAsJfG.png:large |
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Member Blarg. Yoshi. Of. Composing. Affected by 'RainBlarg' Syndrome Level: 110 Posts: 105/3627 EXP: 14057347 Next: 351539 Since: 12-24-12 Last post: 2266 days ago Last view: 2207 days ago |
Koopa is better imo:P And also, you can have a title now. ____________________
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Member Mawile or riot Level: 73
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I just listened to the new one, and I love that drum break! |
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SMG2.5 Cartographer Level: 88 
Posts: 411/2178 EXP: 6558629 Next: 92035 Since: 12-02-12 Last post: 399 days ago Last view: 399 days ago |
Really nice! I can envision it working in a level, but revisions are always welcome. You're pretty fast with compositions.
I struggle with finishing a school project with Finale NotePad. Status: It was really, really fun, guys - thanks for the ride!
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Member Normal user Level: 29 Posts: 28/168 EXP: 139999 Next: 7886 Since: 01-01-13 From: The United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Island Last post: 3846 days ago Last view: 3697 days ago |
I've been trying to make a new revision for a while, but unfortunately I can't do it. Everything I add to the song seems to... take away... if you know what I mean
So I'm just going to leave it as it is for now and get working on something else
@Stygmax: Yeah, a lot of people say that. Thank you
@MC: Thanks! The drum break was kind of iffy, but I think it's better than those boring long notes. I'll come back to working on this at some other point. |
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Member Blarg. Yoshi. Of. Composing. Affected by 'RainBlarg' Syndrome Level: 110 Posts: 166/3627 EXP: 14057347 Next: 351539 Since: 12-24-12 Last post: 2266 days ago Last view: 2207 days ago |
Its still really good. ____________________
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Member Imma Snuggle You Level: 110 
Posts: 1634/3604 EXP: 14206864 Next: 202022 Since: 07-07-12 From: Colorado Last post: 3103 days ago Last view: 1261 days ago |
On second thought after reviewing it once the topic was brought up on the IRC, I do think that latest revision is great except for the drums. The main melody could be turned up *SLIGHTLY* but I like that effect where it's almost like pure synth and in the background of the music. Other then that I think it's fine.
I do think all teh instruments could be sharper. It all seems to blend together. ____________________ "I hate playing musical chats" ~ Quote of the month |
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Member Normal user Level: 29 Posts: 66/168 EXP: 139999 Next: 7886 Since: 01-01-13 From: The United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Island Last post: 3846 days ago Last view: 3697 days ago |
Well, I revised it again recently. It's been ages since I last worked on it so I apologize for that
However, done yes, here link: https://soundcloud.com/geometricexpulsion/factory-possibly-final-version I've changed the main melody's instrument to be sharper and more audible, as well as removing the drum solo and adding in some extra bits here and there. Criticism is, as always, strongly encouraged |
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Member Imma Snuggle You Level: 110
Posts: 1657/3604 EXP: 14206864 Next: 202022 Since: 07-07-12 From: Colorado Last post: 3103 days ago Last view: 1261 days ago |
It's perfect <3
____________________ "I hate playing musical chats" ~ Quote of the month |
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Member mah kitty Level: 74
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Eh, gotta be honest, I still like the original the best. ____________________
|AgentSplaturn| if someone uses an external hard disk to store porn on |AgentSplaturn| is it their sex drive? ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) |skyluigi| agent that's one of the best quotes I've ever seen on this IRC |
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Member Normal user Level: 29 Posts: 67/168 EXP: 139999 Next: 7886 Since: 01-01-13 From: The United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Island Last post: 3846 days ago Last view: 3697 days ago |
To be honest, I can't notice too much variance between the most recent revision and the first one... I'll wait a while to gather some more opinion on this. |
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Member mah kitty Level: 74
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I really liked the long-note section in the original. ____________________
|AgentSplaturn| if someone uses an external hard disk to store porn on |AgentSplaturn| is it their sex drive? ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) |skyluigi| agent that's one of the best quotes I've ever seen on this IRC |
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Member Normal user Level: 29 Posts: 69/168 EXP: 139999 Next: 7886 Since: 01-01-13 From: The United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Island Last post: 3846 days ago Last view: 3697 days ago |
It's still there... it's just much quieter I could edit the dynamics if you want? |
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Member mah kitty Level: 74
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Yeah that would be nice ____________________
|AgentSplaturn| if someone uses an external hard disk to store porn on |AgentSplaturn| is it their sex drive? ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) |skyluigi| agent that's one of the best quotes I've ever seen on this IRC |
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