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Member Mawile or riot Level: 73 Posts: 1324/1420 EXP: 3445556 Next: 40312 Since: 11-20-12 Last post: 1633 days ago Last view: 1633 days ago |
Hello my friends, Hp9 here with an attempt at designing. As you may know I have a broken wrist, and will have a cast until mid August. This makes it hard to draw detailed art, but that doesn't mean I won't try. Anyway, I'm starting a design for Fast Food because I've had my eye on it for a few months now, and this morning Glem told me he isn't currently working on it (He may eventually and this may get trashed, who knows)
So this isn't exactly going to be organized. I'm just going to do what I can and add things as I go along. First, some background. Obviously this galaxy is food based and introduces the dash pepper. My design will have 2 normal stars and a secret star. The first star will just be some random foods forming a dash level, while star 2 will use the breakfast lunch and dinner theme. The secret star will remain secret for now Well, apparently the design I made was very boring and uncreative, so I'm going to take another stab at it. You guys need to keep in mind that this is a world one galaxy, so it's going to be simple and not too difficult. Furthermore, dash yoshi levels are linear, so don't complain that it's that way. Also, I read the design thread yesterday, and a lot of your ideas were for non yoshi sections. I'll try and throw a few in star 2, but they won't all get in. For now we'll focus on star 1, which mainly uses dash yoshi. Here's how I imagine planet 2. It's made of Italian food, fitting for Mario. You start on a white plate and cross a lasagna noodle bridge. Then you get Yoshi on a pizza box, and grab a pepper at the edge of it. You dash up the pizza, across a baguette (Which I guess is French, but the Italians like their bread too ) and over a wavy bundle of spaghetti which then wraps around a vertical fork, forming a curve to dash up. At the top of the fork is a launch star which on the way to planet 3 will take you through a large piece of ziti. This should take 1 pepper to complete. Yes I guess it's short, but if you look at hightail falls most of the planets only take one pepper to complete. Here's a drawing for planet 2: Feedback is appreciated |
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Fire Mario DROP TABLE users; Level: 123 Posts: 1641/4661 EXP: 20824528 Next: 406738 Since: 07-07-12 Last post: 1322 days ago Last view: 334 days ago |
err...he directly stated that;
Anyways, this design looks good so far. Keep up the good work. ____________________ a |
MoreCowbell |
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Member Mawile or riot Level: 73 Posts: 1327/1420 EXP: 3445556 Next: 40312 Since: 11-20-12 Last post: 1633 days ago Last view: 1633 days ago |
Okay guys, I've updated the design and it now has 4 planets, all with my attempt at drawing with a cast
Please leave any feedback/criticism and I'll be sure to read it |
Tahcryon |
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Embodiment of Time Can someone lead me to a non-capitalist clothing store? Level: 128 Posts: 3221/5087 EXP: 23744140 Next: 637560 Since: 07-07-12 Last post: 2177 days ago Last view: 739 days ago |
The pizza. Can't Mario just long jump/flutter jump off the top of it then go towards the launch star? ____________________
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Member Normal user Level: 55 Posts: 608/721 EXP: 1242468 Next: 71721 Since: 12-18-12 Last post: 3750 days ago Last view: 3710 days ago |
Nice one-hand drawing skills. Or persistance.
Well, it's okay, if a bit simple. (yeah, I know, one hand) Maybe you could space the parts out, to make it look like an assortment of food planets rather than a line of glued/lumped together planets. (liked that sandwich thing) Also, definitely should add more hazards to make it more interesting. Say, butter acting like mud on the baguette. ____________________ Burrow Base design- Text complete. I might try my hand at some art...maybe...eventually...? Bullet Base design- Final Frontier- (collab) There's always a light at the end of the tunnel. Of course, it's usually an oncoming express train. Slow and steady gets you trampled by the other guys. |
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Member mah kitty Level: 74 Posts: 869/1426 EXP: 3523824 Next: 129720 Since: 07-07-12 Last post: 2292 days ago Last view: 857 days ago |
Posted by gc This. ____________________ |AgentSplaturn| if someone uses an external hard disk to store porn on |AgentSplaturn| is it their sex drive? ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) |skyluigi| agent that's one of the best quotes I've ever seen on this IRC |
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Member Mawile or riot Level: 73 Posts: 1331/1420 EXP: 3445556 Next: 40312 Since: 11-20-12 Last post: 1633 days ago Last view: 1633 days ago |
I guess I can try to fix the lumped together issue, but keep in mind a couple of things: A. This is world 1, so it's fairly easy and B. It's a dash yoshi galaxy, so it's gonna be quite simple and linear |
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Embodiment of Time Can someone lead me to a non-capitalist clothing store? Level: 128 Posts: 3229/5087 EXP: 23744140 Next: 637560 Since: 07-07-12 Last post: 2177 days ago Last view: 739 days ago |
I was expecting more creativity from you, MC.
Also, that cheese planet looks too hard for like, the 6th galaxy. ____________________
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Member Mawile or riot Level: 73 Posts: 1333/1420 EXP: 3445556 Next: 40312 Since: 11-20-12 Last post: 1633 days ago Last view: 1633 days ago |
The cheese planet is actually fairly easy. I'm more concerned about the fourth |
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Member mah kitty Level: 74 Posts: 870/1426 EXP: 3523824 Next: 129720 Since: 07-07-12 Last post: 2292 days ago Last view: 857 days ago |
This is kinda disappointing. Every planet is tiny (some probably even too short for a single pepper dash) and none of it is particularly exciting. The only thing I kinda like about it is the groundpound sandwich. ____________________ |AgentSplaturn| if someone uses an external hard disk to store porn on |AgentSplaturn| is it their sex drive? ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) |skyluigi| agent that's one of the best quotes I've ever seen on this IRC |
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Member Mawile or riot Level: 73 Posts: 1338/1420 EXP: 3445556 Next: 40312 Since: 11-20-12 Last post: 1633 days ago Last view: 1633 days ago |
Soooooo I've trashed my first draft and I'm beginning my second. The only planet for now is planet 2 which is shown in the first post. |
shibboleet |
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Fire Mario DROP TABLE users; Level: 123 Posts: 1645/4661 EXP: 20824528 Next: 406738 Since: 07-07-12 Last post: 1322 days ago Last view: 334 days ago |
I really don't like the basic design of the level. This should be redone, with new ideas. Some people make designs too early before a certain amount of ideas are given, and make it a bad design. (Not saying this one is)
Derp. Ninja'd ____________________ a |
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Member Mawile or riot Level: 73 Posts: 1339/1420 EXP: 3445556 Next: 40312 Since: 11-20-12 Last post: 1633 days ago Last view: 1633 days ago |
Are you talking about the first draft?
Also this had 9 pages of ideas in the thread, so.... |
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Member Wow k Level: 48 Posts: 266/535 EXP: 787919 Next: 35624 Since: 02-21-13 From: Gallifrey Last post: 655 days ago Last view: 648 days ago |
Maybe make more platforms, and a little less linear. You can have more than one dash pepper, you know. Also, I still stand on my soda water idea. ____________________ Jesus why was I here |
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Normal user Level: 9 Posts: 4/12 EXP: 2562 Next: 600 Since: 11-02-13 From: Mars Last post: 3774 days ago Last view: 3774 days ago |
Fast food Galaxy, nice idea... ____________________ I did not Know I could find a sega galaxy thing! |
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