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Dodecagon |
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Normal user Level: 42 Posts: 36/411 EXP: 505516 Next: 15846 Since: 08-27-13 Last post: 2984 days ago Last view: 2608 days ago |
Alright, here's what I hope to be the finalized concept art of Planet 1 in Thwomp Swamp Galaxy:
http://s837.crapobucket.com/user/GrapeEscape/media/Scan0002_zps79ad3c4f.jpg.html Basically, I just added in a few star bits, a mandibug, and a chance cube room. Planet 2 is complete! Well, the draft, at least. http://s837.crapobucket.com/user/GrapeEscape/media/Scan0005_zpsf2880b37.jpg.html?sort=3&o=0 This is just a quick update to announce that I'm stopping any and all development on this galaxy. So far it's just been a mish-mosh of geometric figures for platforms, random enemy placement, and a very linear build. I've realized that I'm pretty bad at level design and conveying what I imagine the galaxy to be through words. If anyone wants to pick up this galaxy idea and put their own twist on it, by all means go ahead. But if not, I might as well scrap this concept as a whole. |
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Member Imma Snuggle You Level: 109 ![]() Posts: 2577/3604 EXP: 13848042 Next: 111603 Since: 07-07-12 From: Colorado Last post: 2888 days ago Last view: 1046 days ago |
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Dodecagon |
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Normal user Level: 42 Posts: 37/411 EXP: 505516 Next: 15846 Since: 08-27-13 Last post: 2984 days ago Last view: 2608 days ago |
Thanks for that. Thoughts? I don't personally think that I'm going to continue it. |
NoSkinnedKoopa |
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Member "The most intense fight a human will ever have is between the person they are and the person they are capable of becoming!" - Coach Jae Level: 43 ![]() Posts: 238/421 EXP: 541322 Next: 23724 Since: 12-24-12 From: Super Hyrule Land Last post: 2595 days ago Last view: 1867 days ago |
That's a great start, keep up the great work! |
Dodecagon |
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Normal user Level: 42 Posts: 39/411 EXP: 505516 Next: 15846 Since: 08-27-13 Last post: 2984 days ago Last view: 2608 days ago |
Thanks for the encouraging words! After some consideration, it looks like I'm continuing work on this galaxy after all. |
FnarGod |
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The official shader for SMG 2.5 -------------------------- Green Yellow Blue Level: 37 Posts: 288/296 EXP: 316354 Next: 21899 Since: 03-02-13 Last post: 3673 days ago Last view: 3381 days ago |
I have a problem with it. its kinda short for planet 1. it's just a few platforms with some enemies, maybe add some more uh... idk. I just feel like it needs more to it. But the idea is okay! :)
The more designs, the better :P ____________________ (layout nuked; unclosed style tag) |
mariogalaxythree |
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Member Blarg. Yoshi. Of. Composing. Affected by 'RainBlarg' Syndrome Level: 109 Posts: 3228/3627 EXP: 13687524 Next: 272121 Since: 12-24-12 Last post: 2051 days ago Last view: 1991 days ago |
well tbh... I don't like it that much. The design just seems very generic. And we already have toxic terror, so meh... The reason why I wanted you to attempt this design was to see if you had what it takes to be a designer for one of the real galaxies. Your drawing skills are not bad, but you really need to work on making your designs more creative. ____________________
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Tahcryon |
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Embodiment of Time Can someone lead me to a non-capitalist clothing store? Level: 127 Posts: 3532/5087 EXP: 23222559 Next: 504007 Since: 07-07-12 Last post: 1991 days ago Last view: 553 days ago |
Posted by mariogalaxythree Coming from the guy who obsessed over tunnels and tried to put theme in every design he made. Also hm, could you try an isometric view? ____________________
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Dodecagon |
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Normal user Level: 42 Posts: 41/411 EXP: 505516 Next: 15846 Since: 08-27-13 Last post: 2984 days ago Last view: 2608 days ago |
I'm sorry, but drawing things from a 3D perspective is very difficult for me. And I kind of had to cut the first planet short because I ran out of room on my paper. I'll have to try to draw a bit smaller and make some revisions. |
SquidEmpress |
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Faking your suicide is a terrible thing to do. Get out. Level: 99 ![]() Posts: 2295/2912 EXP: 9799720 Next: 200280 Since: 01-30-13 Last post: 2984 days ago Last view: 2983 days ago |
Posted by mariogalaxythree I have got to say, this is a good attempt, actually. However, it seems like Toxic Terror and Foggy Bog to me since this is a swamp galaxy. Because of that the design itself is kacking some creativity. ____________________ Super Mario LOLand Thanks to kaj for helping to port my Acmlmboard 2.5 layout to Acmlmboard 2.064! |
Dodecagon |
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Normal user Level: 42 Posts: 57/411 EXP: 505516 Next: 15846 Since: 08-27-13 Last post: 2984 days ago Last view: 2608 days ago |
The almost completed drawing for planet 2 is now up! Give it a look! |
MK7tester |
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![]() Magikoopa I'm back Level: 103 ![]() Posts: 2378/3145 EXP: 11288383 Next: 183023 Since: 07-07-12 From: Dolphic Island Last post: 2385 days ago Last view: 2383 days ago |
Umm, here's a 3D Representation of Planet 1 (I think?)
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Dodecagon |
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Normal user Level: 42 Posts: 58/411 EXP: 505516 Next: 15846 Since: 08-27-13 Last post: 2984 days ago Last view: 2608 days ago |
Posted by Silver That looks about right. Though, I envisioned the wooden bridges resembling the one seen at the start of Hightail Falls Galaxy, but without the railing. Another thing is that the water isn't the type of purple goop you see in most swamp galaxies. Rather, it's clean, pristine river water (not transparent). I should also add that the little zig-zags in my drawing represent a fence. Guess I should get working on making a key for my drawings... Either way, thanks for this! |
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Member mah kitty Level: 73 ![]() Posts: 1014/1426 EXP: 3446407 Next: 39461 Since: 07-07-12 Last post: 2106 days ago Last view: 671 days ago |
Uh sorry, that's really boring. There's just nothing happening there, even with the couple of thwomps and enemies in the drawing. ____________________ ![]() ![]() |AgentSplaturn| if someone uses an external hard disk to store porn on |AgentSplaturn| is it their sex drive? ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) |skyluigi| agent that's one of the best quotes I've ever seen on this IRC |
Dodecagon |
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Normal user Level: 42 Posts: 60/411 EXP: 505516 Next: 15846 Since: 08-27-13 Last post: 2984 days ago Last view: 2608 days ago |
Posted by Agent000 I realize how small and short planet 1 is. I just haven't quite figured out what to add to it... |
MK7tester |
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![]() Magikoopa I'm back Level: 103 ![]() Posts: 2379/3145 EXP: 11288383 Next: 183023 Since: 07-07-12 From: Dolphic Island Last post: 2385 days ago Last view: 2383 days ago |
Posted by Agent000 That's why it's beta. |
NoSkinnedKoopa |
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Member "The most intense fight a human will ever have is between the person they are and the person they are capable of becoming!" - Coach Jae Level: 43 ![]() Posts: 246/421 EXP: 541322 Next: 23724 Since: 12-24-12 From: Super Hyrule Land Last post: 2595 days ago Last view: 1867 days ago |
Guys, give GrapeEscape a chance. Once his drawings are completed, we'll add more stuff in anyway. Also, this is not a Toxic Galaxy. It's actually a Water Galaxy with Thwomps and ruins and stuff. I said that because maybe he wasn't clear on the meaning "swamp" in terms of this galaxy. On the other hand, keep up the great work GrapeEscape, can't wait to see more. ![]() |
SquidEmpress |
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Faking your suicide is a terrible thing to do. Get out. Level: 99 ![]() Posts: 2320/2912 EXP: 9799720 Next: 200280 Since: 01-30-13 Last post: 2984 days ago Last view: 2983 days ago |
Posted by GrapeEscape Might I suggest having many paths encompassing a round planet? Posted by cosmological Notice how Cosmological put paths on a cube for Stormshine Galaxy. Planet 1 of Thwomp Swamp Galaxy would be better if it was a large spherical planet with many objectives. Just a few paths with Thwomps might be too meager for Planet 1. So I would recommend having some wide open areas to make the first planet be sort of a starting "home". ____________________ Super Mario LOLand Thanks to kaj for helping to port my Acmlmboard 2.5 layout to Acmlmboard 2.064! |
Dodecagon |
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Normal user Level: 42 Posts: 63/411 EXP: 505516 Next: 15846 Since: 08-27-13 Last post: 2984 days ago Last view: 2608 days ago |
Posted by HolyRomanEmperorTatan A cubic planet? That might work. The river could flow around the sides of the cube before finally flowing into planet 2. But, I would like to keep what I have drawn so far for planet 1. Perhaps I could just twist it around so that some paths are on different sides of a cube...any suggestions? |
gc |
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Member Normal user Level: 54 Posts: 644/721 EXP: 1214075 Next: 19795 Since: 12-18-12 Last post: 3564 days ago Last view: 3524 days ago |
Hmm, at first I thought this was a really stupid idea that won't get anywhere.
But maybe if this doesn't get to be a galaxy, we could work some parts into another one...hmmm... Well, anyway, you've gotta do better than a few random 2D sketches of simple platforms if you wanna make this a full design. Keep going. ![]() ____________________ Burrow Base design- Text complete. I might try my hand at some art...maybe...eventually...? Bullet Base design- Final Frontier- (collab) There's always a light at the end of the tunnel. Of course, it's usually an oncoming express train. Slow and steady gets you trampled by the other guys. |
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