Posted by Cono

How do you play it

Posted by Thierry

that's some really over-the-top soundtrack, you can barely make you the start of the track. too close to ear spam.
also, it doesn't really fit the track IMO.

as for the track itself, it's pretty rought but it's not bad for a start. the track is low-poly to begin with so I'll only cover the details:

there's parts you could improve, like the obvious paper-thin bridge and the cliffsides beyond the road not being smoothed at all. it's also lacking grass on those outer walls; I mean there's grass on the ground so it should spread to the outer wall through the texture.

I hope that was clear enough, I hardly ever give feedback for mario tracks.
oh and by the way, if you plan to make more tracks from now on I'd advise against making multiple threads for them. you can just post them in this thread, and eventually rename it if need be.