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Posted on 01-23-13 01:32 PM (rev. 3 of 01-23-13 01:35 PM) Link | #9021
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Last view: 2580 days ago 		I'm not sure :/ It's too quiet for starters (maybe notes need to be articulated more) and the melody is a bit dull... you've done everything Agent specified in the guidelines but... it's just not BIG enough for a flying theme yet, in my opinion.
On the plus side I love that dominant to tonic slurry synth you have there and think that should definitely be kept/used at some other point in the project.

Basically, it's good, but needs work.

EDIT: I agree with MM above, I could see it in a Bowser/Bowser Jr. stage (maybe Bullet Base?)

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Posted on 01-23-13 01:39 PM Link | #9022
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Posted on 01-23-13 03:27 PM Link | #9045
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Last view: 1089 days ago 		The volume is not my problem. It is the problem of my soundfont. I can edit it as well. Also, what type of theme do you THINK would work for Gliding Inferno?

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Posted on 01-23-13 04:05 PM Link | #9058
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Last view: 2580 days ago 		It definitely needs to be fast moving, with a prominent electronic bassline, much like Fleet Glide.
The orchestrated bit must be loud and proud and epic. This is a flying through lava galaxy remember, so anything that doesn't reflect the tone doesn't fit.
If you are having an orchestral melody, it needs to have a lot more variance in it that it currently does. It's very simple at the moment.
We need drums. Lots and lots of drums.

I think this would help the piece a lot :P Feel free to ignore this advice though, it's your own piece to do as you please with :3

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Posted on 01-23-13 04:17 PM Link | #9065
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Last view: 1089 days ago 		I've decided I will redo this song. But in time. I got some SMS remixes I need to do first. When I do get back to this song, I will personally redo the melody, but I will keep some bassline elements of the original. I will also add more drums. Keep in mind, I wanted this one to feel DIFFERENT from Fleet Glide.

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Posted on 01-23-13 04:23 PM Link | #9071
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Last view: 2580 days ago 		That's completely understandable. It needs to keep the same epic feel though even if it evolves to be something completely different. Atmosphere (galaxy puns) is key.

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Posted on 01-23-13 04:25 PM Link | #9073
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Last view: 1089 days ago 		What do you think I should do different than? I will have electronic Synth bassline and an epic melody, but what should I do differently?

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Posted on 01-30-13 09:27 PM Link | #11714
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Last view: 1089 days ago 		It is complete. I have redone the song and It sounds a lot better now!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dii_EtQGvVg&feature=youtu.be

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Posted on 01-30-13 09:30 PM Link | #11715
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Last view: 429 days ago 		._o What is going on with the tempo and percussion...

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Posted on 01-30-13 09:33 PM Link | #11717
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Last view: 1089 days ago 		It is a rough version. The tempo is at 200 and is in 3/4

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Posted on 01-30-13 09:36 PM Link | #11718
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Posted on 01-30-13 09:38 PM Link | #11720
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Last view: 1089 days ago 		I just found out one of the key parts are missing. (flute) I honestly don't know what happened. And the percussion could use more work. I just wanted to post a rough draft.

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Posted on 01-30-13 09:39 PM Link | #11721

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Last view: 27 days ago 		Wow, it could use a bit of tweaking though.

Nice job, though. Not to shabby....in some places.

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Posted on 01-30-13 09:46 PM Link | #11723
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Last view: 1089 days ago 		thank you! Tommorow I will fix the percussion and flute part. I will also make it sound less cluttered (maybe the bassline is too overkill at some parts)

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Posted on 01-30-13 09:54 PM (rev. 2 of 01-30-13 09:55 PM) Link | #11724
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At first, it sounds totally off beat. However, at a second listen, it kinda makes sense. I would add a simple but loud beat similar to the one in fleet glide to make the tempo clearer

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Posted on 01-30-13 10:00 PM Link | #11727
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Last view: 1089 days ago 		Maybe I should just redo all the percussion - maybe use some different drums.

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Posted on 01-30-13 10:10 PM (rev. 2 of 01-30-13 10:10 PM) Link | #11730
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Last view: 144 days ago 		At the part at 1:00 that part seems weird. Maybe put it in a minor chord or something?
I do think percussion could be fixed.

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Posted on 01-30-13 10:23 PM Link | #11732
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Last view: 1089 days ago 		Yes. The chord stack. I can fix that.

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Posted on 01-30-13 10:29 PM Link | #11734
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Last view: 545 days ago 		Okay, I would actually up the tempo a bit, and have that beat I was talking about kick in at about 14 seconds in. And yes, like NWP said those notes at around one sound like poor accidentals

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Posted on 01-31-13 02:55 AM Link | #11802
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Last view: 465 days ago 		It actually sounds kind of happy...I want this to be a galaxy full of dread and suffering >8D

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