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Member Blarg. Yoshi. Of. Composing. Level: 105 Posts: 101/3627 EXP: 12012920 Next: 249340 Since: 12-24-12 Last post: 1149 days ago Last view: 1089 days ago |
this is a really good song. Don't be pressured by just a few who critique your music. I have the most controversial song right now - Dry Boneyard's music. I love it personally, but some feel it's too dark, melody is a bit too much in the background, and it's too ambient (at least the first part). ____________________
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Member Mawile or riot Level: 70 
Posts: 180/1420 EXP: 2959107 Next: 56704 Since: 11-20-12 Last post: 545 days ago Last view: 545 days ago |
 we're just giving honest feedback... obviously it's up to him to change it or not |
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Member mah kitty Level: 71 
Posts: 179/1426 EXP: 3043376 Next: 123738 Since: 07-07-12 Last post: 1204 days ago Last view: 429 days ago |
Yeah, definitely put the long notes back in, though slightly quieter than they were in the older version. ____________________ ![[image]](http://puu.sh/jR7Py/69ae5966ec.png)
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|AgentSplaturn| if someone uses an external hard disk to store porn on |AgentSplaturn| is it their sex drive? ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) |skyluigi| agent that's one of the best quotes I've ever seen on this IRC |
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Member Normal user Level: 28 Posts: 27/168 EXP: 119595 Next: 11743 Since: 01-01-13 From: The United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Island Last post: 2729 days ago Last view: 2580 days ago |
I appreciate the feedback so much  It's really helping with the progression of this theme. It's all constructive and it's all useful  New(er) version (possibly final?) should be up tomorrow. |
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Member Some fraud Number 6738 Embodiment of Space Level: 81 
Posts: 100/2007 EXP: 4969138 Next: 23711 Since: 11-24-12 From: Rogaland, Norway Last post: 1785 days ago Last view: 1758 days ago |
Great! Can't Wait to hear it. I like the old one too 
Yay I'm a.......Koopa. Why is Koopa a higher rank then Shy Guy anyway? Shy Guys are better ____________________ Former SMG2.5 Advertiser and one-time Level Designer/Artist - So Apparently Norway is rich while Denmark and Sweden are happy. What they don't know is that our wealth gives us happiness as well  : https://pbs.twimg.com/media/BfA4EbJCEAAsJfG.png:large |
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Member Blarg. Yoshi. Of. Composing. Level: 105 Posts: 105/3627 EXP: 12012920 Next: 249340 Since: 12-24-12 Last post: 1149 days ago Last view: 1089 days ago |
Koopa is better imo:P And also, you can have a title now. ____________________
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Member Mawile or riot Level: 70
Posts: 182/1420 EXP: 2959107 Next: 56704 Since: 11-20-12 Last post: 545 days ago Last view: 545 days ago |
I just listened to the new one, and I love that drum break! |
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SMG2.5 Cartographer Level: 84 
Posts: 411/2176 EXP: 5602488 Next: 59464 Since: 12-02-12 Last post: 271 days ago Last view: 269 days ago |
Really nice! I can envision it working in a level, but revisions are always welcome. You're pretty fast with compositions.
I struggle with finishing a school project with Finale NotePad. Status: It was really, really fun, guys - thanks for the ride!
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Member Normal user Level: 28 Posts: 28/168 EXP: 119595 Next: 11743 Since: 01-01-13 From: The United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Island Last post: 2729 days ago Last view: 2580 days ago |
I've been trying to make a new revision for a while, but unfortunately I can't do it. Everything I add to the song seems to... take away... if you know what I mean
So I'm just going to leave it as it is for now and get working on something else
@Stygmax: Yeah, a lot of people say that. Thank you
@MC: Thanks! The drum break was kind of iffy, but I think it's better than those boring long notes. I'll come back to working on this at some other point. |
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Member Blarg. Yoshi. Of. Composing. Level: 105 Posts: 166/3627 EXP: 12012920 Next: 249340 Since: 12-24-12 Last post: 1149 days ago Last view: 1089 days ago |
Its still really good. ____________________
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Member Imma Snuggle You Level: 105 
Posts: 1634/3604 EXP: 12228809 Next: 33451 Since: 07-07-12 From: Colorado Last post: 1986 days ago Last view: 144 days ago |
On second thought after reviewing it once the topic was brought up on the IRC, I do think that latest revision is great except for the drums. The main melody could be turned up *SLIGHTLY* but I like that effect where it's almost like pure synth and in the background of the music. Other then that I think it's fine.
I do think all teh instruments could be sharper. It all seems to blend together. ____________________ "I hate playing musical chats" ~ Quote of the month |
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Member Normal user Level: 28 Posts: 66/168 EXP: 119595 Next: 11743 Since: 01-01-13 From: The United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Island Last post: 2729 days ago Last view: 2580 days ago |
Well, I revised it again recently. It's been ages since I last worked on it so I apologize for that
However, done yes, here link: https://soundcloud.com/geometricexpulsion/factory-possibly-final-version I've changed the main melody's instrument to be sharper and more audible, as well as removing the drum solo and adding in some extra bits here and there. Criticism is, as always, strongly encouraged |
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Member Imma Snuggle You Level: 105
Posts: 1657/3604 EXP: 12228809 Next: 33451 Since: 07-07-12 From: Colorado Last post: 1986 days ago Last view: 144 days ago |
It's perfect <3
____________________ "I hate playing musical chats" ~ Quote of the month |
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Member mah kitty Level: 71
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Eh, gotta be honest, I still like the original the best. ____________________
|AgentSplaturn| if someone uses an external hard disk to store porn on |AgentSplaturn| is it their sex drive? ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) |skyluigi| agent that's one of the best quotes I've ever seen on this IRC |
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Member Normal user Level: 28 Posts: 67/168 EXP: 119595 Next: 11743 Since: 01-01-13 From: The United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Island Last post: 2729 days ago Last view: 2580 days ago |
To be honest, I can't notice too much variance between the most recent revision and the first one... I'll wait a while to gather some more opinion on this. |
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Member mah kitty Level: 71
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I really liked the long-note section in the original. ____________________
|AgentSplaturn| if someone uses an external hard disk to store porn on |AgentSplaturn| is it their sex drive? ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) |skyluigi| agent that's one of the best quotes I've ever seen on this IRC |
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Member Normal user Level: 28 Posts: 69/168 EXP: 119595 Next: 11743 Since: 01-01-13 From: The United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Island Last post: 2729 days ago Last view: 2580 days ago |
It's still there... it's just much quieter I could edit the dynamics if you want? |
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Member mah kitty Level: 71
Posts: 369/1426 EXP: 3043376 Next: 123738 Since: 07-07-12 Last post: 1204 days ago Last view: 429 days ago |
Yeah that would be nice ____________________
|AgentSplaturn| if someone uses an external hard disk to store porn on |AgentSplaturn| is it their sex drive? ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) |skyluigi| agent that's one of the best quotes I've ever seen on this IRC |
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