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mariogalaxythree
Posted on 11-17-13 03:52 PM (rev. 2 of 11-17-13 03:52 PM) Link | #35029
Ok, since there is no thread for this, here is gonna have to do. The real reason I am posting this thread is because now, Bowser battle themes are being submitted, like THIS ONE https://soundcloud.com/mariogalaxythree/mystery-2-5-song (ignore the derpy URL name, but still click on it :3 you know you want to...)

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Agent000
Posted on 11-17-13 04:35 PM Link | #35033
ok here we go:

1) If you can find some way to make the violins sound more realistic, that would be great.
2) It all needs to be balanced a bit; more bass
3) The very beginning sounds really abrupt and needs to be smoother.
4) The choir could be quieter, especially during the quieter part where it first comes in.
5) During the climax of it with the choir, it gets rather layered and starts sounding less clean.
6) Try some more percussion, at least a bit more prominent of a snare part throughout. Definitely add it at 1:31 through that quieter part.
7) Try making the choir less active, with a lot of long, held-out notes rather than a bunch of shorter ones.

Other than that, this is sounding really good o,,,,,,,,,,o

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mariogalaxythree
Posted on 11-17-13 05:09 PM Link | #35035
On point 7... Don't you remember "SOAP SOAP SOAP SOAP" from the first Bowser Battle? I am trying to do something like that lol, but I don't have any samples to do that :(

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Agent000
Posted on 11-18-13 03:54 AM Link | #35075
Listening to it again, what I said about the choir goes double. Maybe also try to have a slightly less repetitive melody.

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Mika_Galactic
Posted on 11-25-13 07:13 AM Link | #35322
Hello, :D here is my proposal.

https://soundcloud.com/mikaela-hernandez-rivera/vs-bowser-v1-0

Name:Vs. Bowser
Version: 1.0
Stile: a fight theme based on SMG1 & 2

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My Music Themes List:



Fast Food Galaxy V1.0
Buzzing By Galaxy Music V2.0 (Aproved)
Coastline Cavern Galaxy / Overbeach V1.0 Underwater V1.0
Misty Peacks Galaxy V1.0
Gliding Canyon Galaxy V1.7.2
Riddel Ruins Galaxy V3.0

mariogalaxythree
Posted on 11-28-13 12:56 AM (rev. 3 of 11-28-13 01:12 AM) Link | #35424
https://soundcloud.com/mariogalaxythree/bowser-battle-super-mario

V1.1 is now released. Enjoy. FIXED.





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Agent000
Posted on 11-28-13 01:33 AM Link | #35426
That really prominent tuba sounds silly :s
The choir is still derpy and too active.

Honestly I wouldn't mind if you just removed everything from 0:11 to 0:43 :P

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mariogalaxythree
Posted on 11-28-13 01:41 AM Link | #35428
The choir is really giving me trouble to get right, mainly because the sounds for it are a bit too outdated. And is it the tune of the tuba part you don't like, or is it the fact that its too loud? I have other bass instruments running too, but less prominently. So yeah.

And for the choir, maybe you could help me. As for the first section, It is supposed to be quieter to introduce the melody and make the transition section more dramatic. Similar in style to the SMG1 Bowser Battle theme

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Mika_Galactic
Posted on 11-28-13 07:04 AM Link | #35440
Hey... You dont listen my song? :'(

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"no! can not say that this will be a failure, all make an effort to work by. But please, do not cancel this beautiful project. I will strive more, we will strive more. do not let this die."

My Music Themes List:



Fast Food Galaxy V1.0
Buzzing By Galaxy Music V2.0 (Aproved)
Coastline Cavern Galaxy / Overbeach V1.0 Underwater V1.0
Misty Peacks Galaxy V1.0
Gliding Canyon Galaxy V1.7.2
Riddel Ruins Galaxy V3.0

mariogalaxythree
Posted on 11-28-13 05:39 PM Link | #35446
I did. I thought it was alright. It is somewhat dissonant for a bowser battle, however. It should be minor with a catchy tune and memorable.

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mariogalaxythree
Posted on 12-28-13 05:07 AM (rev. 2 of 12-28-13 05:10 AM) Link | #36813
https://soundcloud.com/mariogalaxythree/bowser-battle V3 is here. I made quite a few changes.

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MK7tester
Posted on 12-28-13 05:11 AM Link | #36814
Uhh, I like Mika's better. (I actually was going to vote yours but you posted the wrong link)

NoSkinnedKoopa
Posted on 12-28-13 05:29 AM Link | #36815
MG3's just sounds too soft and silly with the sparkles, needs more "epic" instruments. Mika's music sounds a little more fitting and the theme/beat of it sounds cool, but she could use some more "epic" instruments as well. (Idk how to explain at this stuff, Agent's got it).

Agent000
Posted on 12-28-13 05:33 AM Link | #36816
Like all your pieces tend to do, it gets kinda layered and muddy towards the end, before looping. Otherwise, it's pretty cool. I'm fine with the kinda fake-ish choir, because the way the battle works the player will only hear it for a couple seconds at a time.

Also the main melody reminds me of pirates

Mika's isn't bad, but it's very repetitive with no real melody, and it's slow enough to feel lethargic.

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