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mariogalaxythree |
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Member Blarg. Yoshi. Of. Composing. Affected by 'RainBlarg' Syndrome Level: 110 Posts: 3403/3627 EXP: 14006884 Next: 402002 Since: 12-24-12 Last post: 2237 days ago Last view: 2177 days ago |
Ok, since there is no thread for this, here is gonna have to do. The real reason I am posting this thread is because now, Bowser battle themes are being submitted, like THIS ONE https://soundcloud.com/mariogalaxythree/mystery-2-5-song (ignore the derpy URL name, but still click on it you know you want to...) ____________________
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Agent000 |
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Member mah kitty Level: 74 Posts: 1199/1426 EXP: 3523525 Next: 130019 Since: 07-07-12 Last post: 2291 days ago Last view: 856 days ago |
ok here we go:
1) If you can find some way to make the violins sound more realistic, that would be great. 2) It all needs to be balanced a bit; more bass 3) The very beginning sounds really abrupt and needs to be smoother. 4) The choir could be quieter, especially during the quieter part where it first comes in. 5) During the climax of it with the choir, it gets rather layered and starts sounding less clean. 6) Try some more percussion, at least a bit more prominent of a snare part throughout. Definitely add it at 1:31 through that quieter part. 7) Try making the choir less active, with a lot of long, held-out notes rather than a bunch of shorter ones. Other than that, this is sounding really good o,,,,,,,,,,o ____________________ |AgentSplaturn| if someone uses an external hard disk to store porn on |AgentSplaturn| is it their sex drive? ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) |skyluigi| agent that's one of the best quotes I've ever seen on this IRC |
mariogalaxythree |
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Member Blarg. Yoshi. Of. Composing. Affected by 'RainBlarg' Syndrome Level: 110 Posts: 3404/3627 EXP: 14006884 Next: 402002 Since: 12-24-12 Last post: 2237 days ago Last view: 2177 days ago |
On point 7... Don't you remember "SOAP SOAP SOAP SOAP" from the first Bowser Battle? I am trying to do something like that lol, but I don't have any samples to do that ____________________
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Agent000 |
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Member mah kitty Level: 74 Posts: 1201/1426 EXP: 3523525 Next: 130019 Since: 07-07-12 Last post: 2291 days ago Last view: 856 days ago |
Listening to it again, what I said about the choir goes double. Maybe also try to have a slightly less repetitive melody. ____________________ |AgentSplaturn| if someone uses an external hard disk to store porn on |AgentSplaturn| is it their sex drive? ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) |skyluigi| agent that's one of the best quotes I've ever seen on this IRC |
Mika_Galactic |
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Member Normal user Level: 21 Posts: 79/83 EXP: 47671 Next: 2272 Since: 05-11-13 From: Mexico Last post: 3770 days ago Last view: 3150 days ago |
Hello, here is my proposal.
https://soundcloud.com/mikaela-hernandez-rivera/vs-bowser-v1-0 Name:Vs. Bowser Version: 1.0 Stile: a fight theme based on SMG1 & 2 ____________________ "no! can not say that this will be a failure, all make an effort to work by. But please, do not cancel this beautiful project. I will strive more, we will strive more. do not let this die." My Music Themes List: |
mariogalaxythree |
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Member Blarg. Yoshi. Of. Composing. Affected by 'RainBlarg' Syndrome Level: 110 Posts: 3417/3627 EXP: 14006884 Next: 402002 Since: 12-24-12 Last post: 2237 days ago Last view: 2177 days ago |
https://soundcloud.com/mariogalaxythree/bowser-battle-super-mario
V1.1 is now released. Enjoy. FIXED. ____________________
-MG3- IS HERE |
Agent000 |
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Member mah kitty Level: 74 Posts: 1211/1426 EXP: 3523525 Next: 130019 Since: 07-07-12 Last post: 2291 days ago Last view: 856 days ago |
That really prominent tuba sounds silly :s
The choir is still derpy and too active. Honestly I wouldn't mind if you just removed everything from 0:11 to 0:43 ____________________ |AgentSplaturn| if someone uses an external hard disk to store porn on |AgentSplaturn| is it their sex drive? ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) |skyluigi| agent that's one of the best quotes I've ever seen on this IRC |
mariogalaxythree |
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Member Blarg. Yoshi. Of. Composing. Affected by 'RainBlarg' Syndrome Level: 110 Posts: 3419/3627 EXP: 14006884 Next: 402002 Since: 12-24-12 Last post: 2237 days ago Last view: 2177 days ago |
The choir is really giving me trouble to get right, mainly because the sounds for it are a bit too outdated. And is it the tune of the tuba part you don't like, or is it the fact that its too loud? I have other bass instruments running too, but less prominently. So yeah.
And for the choir, maybe you could help me. As for the first section, It is supposed to be quieter to introduce the melody and make the transition section more dramatic. Similar in style to the SMG1 Bowser Battle theme ____________________
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Mika_Galactic |
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Member Normal user Level: 21 Posts: 81/83 EXP: 47671 Next: 2272 Since: 05-11-13 From: Mexico Last post: 3770 days ago Last view: 3150 days ago |
Hey... You dont listen my song? :'( ____________________ "no! can not say that this will be a failure, all make an effort to work by. But please, do not cancel this beautiful project. I will strive more, we will strive more. do not let this die." My Music Themes List: |
mariogalaxythree |
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Member Blarg. Yoshi. Of. Composing. Affected by 'RainBlarg' Syndrome Level: 110 Posts: 3422/3627 EXP: 14006884 Next: 402002 Since: 12-24-12 Last post: 2237 days ago Last view: 2177 days ago |
I did. I thought it was alright. It is somewhat dissonant for a bowser battle, however. It should be minor with a catchy tune and memorable. ____________________
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mariogalaxythree |
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Member Blarg. Yoshi. Of. Composing. Affected by 'RainBlarg' Syndrome Level: 110 Posts: 3481/3627 EXP: 14006884 Next: 402002 Since: 12-24-12 Last post: 2237 days ago Last view: 2177 days ago |
https://soundcloud.com/mariogalaxythree/bowser-battle V3 is here. I made quite a few changes. ____________________
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MK7tester |
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Magikoopa I'm back Level: 104 Posts: 2724/3145 EXP: 11540962 Next: 321164 Since: 07-07-12 From: Dolphic Island Last post: 2570 days ago Last view: 2568 days ago |
Uhh, I like Mika's better. (I actually was going to vote yours but you posted the wrong link) |
NoSkinnedKoopa |
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Member "The most intense fight a human will ever have is between the person they are and the person they are capable of becoming!" - Coach Jae Level: 43 Posts: 313/421 EXP: 553950 Next: 11096 Since: 12-24-12 From: Super Hyrule Land Last post: 2780 days ago Last view: 2052 days ago |
MG3's just sounds too soft and silly with the sparkles, needs more "epic" instruments. Mika's music sounds a little more fitting and the theme/beat of it sounds cool, but she could use some more "epic" instruments as well. (Idk how to explain at this stuff, Agent's got it). |
Agent000 |
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Member mah kitty Level: 74 Posts: 1242/1426 EXP: 3523525 Next: 130019 Since: 07-07-12 Last post: 2291 days ago Last view: 856 days ago |
Like all your pieces tend to do, it gets kinda layered and muddy towards the end, before looping. Otherwise, it's pretty cool. I'm fine with the kinda fake-ish choir, because the way the battle works the player will only hear it for a couple seconds at a time.
Mika's isn't bad, but it's very repetitive with no real melody, and it's slow enough to feel lethargic. ____________________ |AgentSplaturn| if someone uses an external hard disk to store porn on |AgentSplaturn| is it their sex drive? ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) |skyluigi| agent that's one of the best quotes I've ever seen on this IRC |
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