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Posted on 07-10-13 12:26 PM (rev. 3 of 07-11-13 12:16 PM) Link | #27747
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Last view: 545 days ago 		Hello my friends, Hp9 here with an attempt at designing. As you may know I have a broken wrist, and will have a cast until mid August. This makes it hard to draw detailed art, but that doesn't mean I won't try. Anyway, I'm starting a design for Fast Food because I've had my eye on it for a few months now, and this morning Glem told me he isn't currently working on it (He may eventually and this may get trashed, who knows)

So this isn't exactly going to be organized. I'm just going to do what I can and add things as I go along.


First, some background. Obviously this galaxy is food based and introduces the dash pepper. My design will have 2 normal stars and a secret star. The first star will just be some random foods forming a dash level, while star 2 will use the breakfast lunch and dinner theme. The secret star will remain secret for now ;)

Well, apparently the design I made was very boring and uncreative, so I'm going to take another stab at it. You guys need to keep in mind that this is a world one galaxy, so it's going to be simple and not too difficult. Furthermore, dash yoshi levels are linear, so don't complain that it's that way. Also, I read the design thread yesterday, and a lot of your ideas were for non yoshi sections. I'll try and throw a few in star 2, but they won't all get in. For now we'll focus on star 1, which mainly uses dash yoshi.

Here's how I imagine planet 2. It's made of Italian food, fitting for Mario. You start on a white plate and cross a lasagna noodle bridge. Then you get Yoshi on a pizza box, and grab a pepper at the edge of it. You dash up the pizza, across a baguette (Which I guess is French, but the Italians like their bread too :P) and over a wavy bundle of spaghetti which then wraps around a vertical fork, forming a curve to dash up. At the top of the fork is a launch star which on the way to planet 3 will take you through a large piece of ziti.

This should take 1 pepper to complete. Yes I guess it's short, but if you look at hightail falls most of the planets only take one pepper to complete.

Here's a drawing for planet 2:


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Feedback is appreciated

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Posted on 07-10-13 06:09 PM Link | #27769

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This is nice and all, but you should have wait to posted it until you have at least mapped out the entire star. This is just a setup for confusion.

err...he directly stated that;


So this isn't exactly going to be organized. I'm just going to do what I can and add things as I go along.



Anyways, this design looks good so far. Keep up the good work.

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Posted on 07-10-13 08:43 PM Link | #27773
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Last view: 545 days ago 		Okay guys, I've updated the design and it now has 4 planets, all with my attempt at drawing with a cast :P

Please leave any feedback/criticism and I'll be sure to read it

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Posted on 07-10-13 10:57 PM Link | #27786
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Last view: 465 days ago 		The pizza. Can't Mario just long jump/flutter jump off the top of it then go towards the launch star?

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Posted on 07-11-13 07:31 AM Link | #27798
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Last view: 2622 days ago 		Nice one-hand drawing skills. Or persistance. :P
Well, it's okay, if a bit simple. (yeah, I know, one hand)
Maybe you could space the parts out, to make it look like an assortment of food planets rather than a line of glued/lumped together planets.
(liked that sandwich thing)
Also, definitely should add more hazards to make it more interesting.
Say, butter acting like mud on the baguette.

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Posted on 07-11-13 07:33 AM Link | #27799
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Posted by gc
make it look like an assortment of food planets rather than a line of glued/lumped together planets


This.

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Posted on 07-11-13 08:28 AM (rev. 2 of 07-11-13 08:29 AM) Link | #27804
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Last view: 545 days ago 		I guess I can try to fix the lumped together issue, but keep in mind a couple of things: A. This is world 1, so it's fairly easy and B. It's a dash yoshi galaxy, so it's gonna be quite simple and linear

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Posted on 07-11-13 09:40 AM Link | #27810
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Last view: 465 days ago 		I was expecting more creativity from you, MC.

Also, that cheese planet looks too hard for like, the 6th galaxy.

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Posted on 07-11-13 09:45 AM Link | #27811
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Last view: 545 days ago 		The cheese planet is actually fairly easy. I'm more concerned about the fourth

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Last view: 429 days ago 		This is kinda disappointing. Every planet is tiny (some probably even too short for a single pepper dash) and none of it is particularly exciting. The only thing I kinda like about it is the groundpound sandwich.

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Posted on 07-11-13 12:17 PM Link | #27840
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Last view: 545 days ago 		Soooooo I've trashed my first draft and I'm beginning my second. The only planet for now is planet 2 which is shown in the first post.

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Posted on 07-11-13 12:18 PM (rev. 2 of 07-11-13 12:18 PM) Link | #27841

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Last view: 27 days ago 		I really don't like the basic design of the level. This should be redone, with new ideas. Some people make designs too early before a certain amount of ideas are given, and make it a bad design. (Not saying this one is)

Derp. Ninja'd >_<

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Posted on 07-11-13 12:19 PM Link | #27842
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Last view: 545 days ago 		Are you talking about the first draft?

Also this had 9 pages of ideas in the thread, so....

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Posted on 07-15-13 10:00 PM Link | #28112
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Last view: 729 days ago 		Maybe make more platforms, and a little less linear. You can have more than one dash pepper, you know. Also, I still stand on my soda water idea.

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Last view: 2686 days ago 		Fast food Galaxy, nice idea...

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