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Rosalink13
Posted on 11-08-13 07:04 PM (rev. 2 of 11-08-13 07:04 PM) Link | #34639
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Star 1 - The Polluted Pipe Maze

Mario lands on a narrow path. Along the path, there are Goombas, Octoombas and a Koopa for Mario to avoid, along with coins and star bits for Mario to collect. At the end of the path, there is an old, ruined archway that says "Welcome To Toad Town" (it will actually say Wlcme To Toad Twn).
An overview of the planet

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A key for the overview

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Once Mario enters the town, he will realize it is completely abandoned; all the toad houses are boarded up and litter and tumbleweeds are blowing around. However, Mario spots one toad standing by a large fountain

The fountain:

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The Toad says: "Mario! Please help me! All the sewers are polluted, and the other Toads have run away!"
After the cutscene, Mario can explore the village. There are plenty of enemies, coins, starbits and even a chance cube. Mario can enter any pipe he wants when he is done exploring.

The left-most pipe - Mario will appear in an under-water section with a koopa shell nearby. He will swim through the sewers, avoiding Snoodles, Gringills and Urchins. On the way, he should collect five ? coins, which will unlock a cage at the end. The cage will let fresh water into the sewers. Mario will exit via a pipe, which will bring him up in the same place.
A concept in two parts:

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The second pipe from the left - This section will be a dry pipe maze. There will be three pipes in each room, including an exit pipe to the surface. There will be 10 rooms in all, including one with a comet medal. There will also be five ? coins in different rooms, and they will trigger a release of clean water. Mario can then explore the maze underwater, or leave.
A top-down view of the pipe maze:

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Third pipe from left - Mario lands in an enormous pipe (supermassive pipe) filled with water. He will find an ice flower sitting on a large rock, and he can use it to skate through the pipe, avoiding Choppas, Huge Paragoombas and Scuttle Bugs. Falling into the water will cause Mario to take damage. Once again, he should collect five ? coins in order to unlock the cage.

Fourth pipe from left - This pipe will be a long Tall Trunk slide in a sewer pipe. Mario will avoid gaps in the pipe and the same enemies as the rest of the level. If he collects all five ? coins, a cutscene of the pipe being magically repaired will play, and clean water will flood through it.

Fifth pipe from left - Mario lands on a large piece of litter floating in the water. Below him, a deep pool of poisonous water flows past him. Mario must, once again, collect five ? coins, but he must avoid the deadly water by jumping on the litter floating through the sewer. If he can survive to the end, he can return to the surface.

Once Mario enters the pipe, a cutscene will play depicting the fountain becoming clean. All the litter vanishes and the toads return. After the cutscene, Mario will talk to the toad he met at the start of the galaxy:
"Thank you, Mario! You saved our village. Take this!"
A star will pop out of the fountain, and Mario can collect it.
You got a star!
(All art was done by my sister, it's a bit derp :P )
Edit: new art added (new art by me)

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Jesse
Posted on 11-08-13 09:54 PM Link | #34643
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Last view: 1934 days ago 		its a good idea, but toad town in space... sounds a little bit odd for me.

NWPlayer123
Posted on 11-08-13 10:03 PM Link | #34645
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Tahcryon
Posted on 11-09-13 04:46 AM Link | #34696
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Posted by NWPlayer123
It was in the prologue for both SMG1 and SMG2, but I don't see you complaining :P


That was the mushroom kingdom, afaik. Mario hadn't even gone to space yet.

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Posted on 11-09-13 04:50 AM Link | #34697
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Posted on 11-09-13 04:53 AM Link | #34698
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Rosalink13
Posted on 11-20-13 08:34 PM Link | #35181
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Posted on 11-20-13 08:38 PM Link | #35182
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